Poetry - Limerick
The Day I was "Frass"
The Day I was "Frass"
I was doing a blog in class
But I was looking at the grass
I swore I was home
But I wasn't on my own
And I realized I was "Frass"
I brought my knees to the floor
'Cuz I couldn't get to the door
I crawled my way through
Made it to my Doudou
And had him begging for more
Raeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. lol Good limericks R.Narcisse
ReplyDeleteThis limerick is very interesting and it brings out your ingenuity and innovative ideas. Also, the pictures are very colourful and it stimulates massive interest to anyone reading especially the visual learners.
ReplyDeleteMichaela
I can relate to this limerick. I like the photo that is added to the post because it gives me a clearer picture of what the limerick is saying.
ReplyDeleteNoelita
The picture is quite entertaining.It depicts the emotions exuding from the limmerick. I know many people can attest to this feeling of longing to meet their doudou and would crawl on their knees if they have to just to get that satisfaction.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely in love with this limerick. I see best-selling authors in the making.
ReplyDeleteThe ending causht me by surprise. This piece is amusing, the picture compliments this text. well done!- Kashey
ReplyDeleteI can definitely relate to this limerick. It was quite amusing. I also appreciate how it was different from the rest that I have read -including the context- because you were able to use two sets of limericks to form one. Great job!
ReplyDeleteWritten by: Leotha Felix
Oh wow I loved this ! This limerick was very humorous. I had a good laugh reading this entertaining piece. What I do know, is that many can attest to this.
ReplyDeleteGood job!
Nasha John
A very Interesting limerick.
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